tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post7478034612538714144..comments2023-10-09T15:45:05.148+05:30Comments on INSIDE MY HEAD: Have You Seen My Heart?Andy Vartehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07957397883197773185noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-82178510058669559542010-06-20T05:06:01.623+05:302010-06-20T05:06:01.623+05:30@ku2: Well... I've just seen your comment! I a...@ku2: Well... I've just seen your comment! I apologize, first off - I don't usually take the time to backtrack and check on my earlier posts... something I decided to do tonight.. rather this morning (jeez it's already 5am and I haven't slept!) Anyways... unfortunately this little exchange of rhymes didn't end well... look for "Ballad of the Broken" for more insight :(Andy Vartehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957397883197773185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-84628865114768560192010-03-10T19:51:07.532+05:302010-03-10T19:51:07.532+05:30hahaha, I have just seen this. I love it, and I lo...hahaha, I have just seen this. I love it, and I love this Hruaii girl. Have you found her yet? go, go, goooo... <br />"Its helplessly fun 4 a girl, u see/<br />to be shrouded in mystery" I looooove this *big grin* <br />U don't deserve her! haha, being mean, but jeez, u start talkin about one girl and then u immediately pounce on Hruaii... still, its understandable, she sounds greatku2https://www.blogger.com/profile/16670201021888283331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-92010918455683055602009-03-09T19:06:00.000+05:302009-03-09T19:06:00.000+05:30"so here i am waiting for you"???can this be more ..."so here i am waiting for you"???<BR/>can this be more desperate? andy shakespeare! <BR/><BR/>this is too much sometimes, i respect ur poetry and all but sometimes can we just talk in normal human speech? ur like the michael jackson of poet land. plz come back to earth and mingle with us poor ordinary earthlings..peace.<BR/><BR/>p.s. your head is just fine.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-2728926894458139852009-02-14T12:22:00.000+05:302009-02-14T12:22:00.000+05:30A person with a passionate heart will definitely u...A person with a passionate heart will definitely understand this poem. bravo..!!EPISTEMOLOGYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04974270303370519990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-24874166540671199302009-02-14T04:35:00.000+05:302009-02-14T04:35:00.000+05:30@ Hruaii - Have a heart fair maiden, reveal thysel...@ Hruaii - <BR/>Have a heart fair maiden, reveal thyself,<BR/>Thy name, thy number or a yahoo ID.. <BR/>hehe..U guys would make a lovely poetic couple.. :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-4074395214311267522009-02-14T01:39:00.000+05:302009-02-14T01:39:00.000+05:30@V.e.l.P.E: Thanks... it's just great to get some ...@V.e.l.P.E: Thanks... it's just great to get some appreciation from someone who hails from good ol' GCS where I spent 9 and a half years of my life...Andy Vartehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957397883197773185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-40057798631043640392009-02-14T01:20:00.000+05:302009-02-14T01:20:00.000+05:30I sit still, as I close my eyes;I try to think, ge...I sit still, as I close my eyes;<BR/>I try to think, get my focus right.<BR/>But the words I see tell no lies,<BR/>There, laid out in plain sight - <BR/>A ballad, in perfect rhyme!<BR/>Enchanted, losing track of time,<BR/>I tell myself that it's a lie;<BR/>It's not possible, not ever!<BR/>Thoughts of you, begin to fly<BR/>Round my head, now it's a fever - <BR/>I need to get to know you better!<BR/>So have a heart, I need an answer!<BR/>For as much as I try and deny,<BR/>Your rhymes have me, I cannot lie;<BR/>Even now though I haven't seen you,<BR/>In shades of red, black and blue,<BR/>I think of you, and form a picture,<BR/>Though I know I could never capture<BR/>Your essence, your beauty sublime,<BR/>With the simple words that I rhyme.<BR/>So please, would you hear my plea?<BR/>I beg of you, down on one knee;<BR/>A little something about yourself,<BR/>Just to help me live with myself.<BR/>If not I could never ever forgive<BR/>Myself during this life I live,<BR/>Knowing that I'd never get to know,<BR/>About the girl that charmed me so.<BR/>In dreams you'll be until you do,<BR/>So here I am waiting for you!Andy Vartehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957397883197773185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-75592924395397655992009-02-13T22:22:00.000+05:302009-02-13T22:22:00.000+05:30andy.....was ya senior in gcs...maybe u'l kno me.....andy.....was ya senior in gcs...maybe u'l kno me..maybe not...luv ya verses...keep it upV.el.P.Ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18002002534420994463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-42430761936319262922009-02-13T19:46:00.000+05:302009-02-13T19:46:00.000+05:30Fate or destiny,whatever the answerI know for u it...Fate or destiny,whatever the answer<BR/>I know for u it wil only get better<BR/>Who or what is a perfect lover?<BR/>And is there such a thing,i wonder?<BR/>Rhyming words,love n promise of forever<BR/>Should hav been enough 4 her not 2 leave,ever!<BR/><BR/>I don't know u but 4 ur rhymes<BR/>I believe ur curiousity must grow like vines<BR/>As yet i shan't disclose dat veiled identity<BR/>Of dis girl who's nothin but ordinary<BR/>For it's helplesly fun 4 a girl,u see<BR/>To be shrouded in mystery! ;-)Hruaiihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08214858280398520164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-35624088597280546942009-02-13T19:43:00.000+05:302009-02-13T19:43:00.000+05:30Fate or destiny,whatever the answerI know for u it...Fate or destiny,whatever the answer<BR/>I know for u it wil only get better<BR/>Who or what is a perfect lover?<BR/>And is there such a thing,i wonder?<BR/>Rhyming words,love n promise of forever<BR/>Should hav been enough 4 her not 2 leave,ever!<BR/><BR/>I don't know u but 4 ur rhymes<BR/>I believe ur curiousity must grow like vines<BR/>As yet i shan't disclose dat veiled identity<BR/>Of dis girl who's nothin but ordinary<BR/>For it's helplesly fun 4 a girl,u see<BR/>To be shrouded in mystery! ;-)Hruaiihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08214858280398520164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-53489715610392080452009-02-13T00:33:00.000+05:302009-02-13T00:33:00.000+05:30@Hruaii: First off, where have you been all my lif...@Hruaii: First off, where have you been all my life? :-)<BR/><BR/>I quiver with curiosity - <BR/>My mind drawn to you helplessly.<BR/>Who are you? Do you know me?<BR/>Could you lift the shrowd of mystery,<BR/>That prevents me so from learning<BR/>Of the lady so adept at rhyming?<BR/><BR/>And yes, I lost her you see,<BR/>Call it fate, or destiny,<BR/>But alas! She wouldn't stay with me!<BR/>I am no treasure for her - <BR/>My love only held her down.<BR/>I am hardly the perfect lover,<BR/>All I could give her was a frown!<BR/>For all I had were words that rhyme,<BR/>And what she needed was so much more...<BR/>Though I loved her she was never mine,<BR/>And in the end she walked out the door...Andy Vartehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957397883197773185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-30184617367951075552009-02-12T18:44:00.000+05:302009-02-12T18:44:00.000+05:30let me do it dis way- Hard to take as it may "Have...let me do it dis way-<BR/> Hard to take as it may<BR/> "Have you seen my heart?" u say<BR/> But when the pain subsides<BR/> Wit time like poerful tides <BR/> You'll look back to know n smile<BR/> At what u've been denyin 4 a while<BR/> That she's the one who lost, a treasure<BR/> Someone who truely loves her! :-)<BR/><BR/>i've been there,i should know...Hruaiihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08214858280398520164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-54076792627368113212009-02-10T22:44:00.000+05:302009-02-10T22:44:00.000+05:30Thanks everybody...! But don't worry, it's like th...Thanks everybody...! But don't worry, it's like they say - "You only hurt the ones you love..." eh? @blackestred: I did here about Iron Maiden's gig... and if I wasn't knee deep in assignments, I'd be there singing along with Bruce Dickinson... :-(Andy Vartehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957397883197773185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-29489610033495706502009-02-10T13:04:00.000+05:302009-02-10T13:04:00.000+05:30I think sb here is in love..:) I've been reading y...I think sb here is in love..:) I've been reading your poems Andy... and apart from the prodigy that u are, this is one thing I find highly conspicuous ^__^Zoramihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03562612778096523739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-31665224822400187992009-02-10T05:33:00.000+05:302009-02-10T05:33:00.000+05:30I love your poems, the way the words flow and rhym...I love your poems, the way the words flow and rhymes perfectly.. I hope you do find her ;)<BR/>Btw.. hope u heard Iron Maiden is performing in B'lore.. Wish I could be there..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-37986181962736938452009-02-10T03:43:00.000+05:302009-02-10T03:43:00.000+05:30hmmm...pouring your heart out eh? i love this poem...hmmm...pouring your heart out eh? i love this poem! straight from the heart i suppose? keep your heart intact it belongs only to you.. ;)Babie LalSangzelihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02903855373703597941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5271181869619202056.post-58375765031117975622009-02-09T15:03:00.000+05:302009-02-09T15:03:00.000+05:30Very interesting, and sad, and heartbreaking.Very interesting, and sad, and heartbreaking.Aduhi Chawngthuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09354958246245503600noreply@blogger.com